Swordspoint by Ellen Kushner
Warning: Here there be Ramblings -- this book was amazing in so many ways, but in large part, it isn't the plot but the prose that has inspired a feast for critical thought. So I'll say up front, I did love this book and I adored Richard and Alec, but this book has sent me on some exciting rabbit holes of thought I fear won't translate well into narrative, so if you take nothing else away from this post, take this: Read this book. You won't be sorry.
Sometimes, when a book comes into your life, the first thing you think when you come to the end is "Why did I not read this sooner?!" This, after a happy little sigh, is exactly what I thought on coming to the end of
Swordspoint. It's not like I haven't had the opportunity. I've known of Kushner's work for ages. She's cited by my all-time favorite author and biggest influence Charles de Lint and by Neil Gaiman as one of the best, and I trust these peeps. For his Audible book series Neil Gaiman Presents, Gaiman writes "
Swordspoint is a fairy tale of sorts, but a fairy tale for grown-ups, as if Jane Austen wrote fantasy. It’s an imaginary world where the characters are real people: a Vanity Fair of aristocrats, rogues, orphans, and heroes; a book where the best swordsman in the land can make more money dueling at private parties than he can as a knight-errant." Authors I admire and adore seem to have lined up to write blurbs for this book (at least my edition, for Nook, has
pages of praise, high praise. Despite the stars aligning, I had a bit of a hard time getting into this book.
I meant to write earlier about the way cover art can unduly influence a reading of a book, and this goofy cover gave me pause. I'm sorry to anyone who loves this cover, but it's goofy. Not that it would stop me from reading the book in public, although as I said, I got this book for my Nook because I got a load of gift cards for graduation and had to spend it on something. But one of my top ten desert island books,
Jack of Kinrowan by Charles de Lint also has a goofy cover with this same art. But it does set up certain expectations for the story contained therein. I shouldn't have worried, because like
Jack,
Swordspoint itself doesn't have much to do with the cover, at least as I imagined the characters. Those outfits are no good for swordplay.
I finally decided to read this book because I came across it on a list of LGBT fantasy,
fantasy being the operative word. Combined with the cover, I was expecting some sort of swords-and-sorcery story. While there were swords aplenty, I found myself distracted waiting for the sorcery. Finally, I looked up the book on the Magical Interweb and found the
Wikipedia article which describes the story as "mannerpunk*,"and the fantasy is that Riverside isn't a real place. Once I got
that** sorted, I could sink into the twisty story of political machinations, where sex and swords are the best weapons, and I polished the book off in about three days.
And OMG, this book was awesome! Why are there not more books like this?! Alternately, where can I find more? I love that there's not really a villain but humans doing their human thing, grabbing for power, trying to hold on to what they have or who they have. The only person I wholly rooted for in this book was Richard, and even then I wanted to shake him a few times, particularly at the end of the book. And Alec!? Why do you want to hurt me so? I only want your happiness. I
may have shaken my fists at the sky a few times at Alec's antics. Also, I couldn't help but picture one of my friends as Alec because he behaves in much the same way, and no amount of charm can make me not want to shake you until you grow up, Alec!
I loved that the characters were just so very human. I loved their complex natures as I loved the clean, sophisticated and sexy prose. I have definitely found a model for how I want my own prose to be in Kushner's writing. Not my blog prose, obviously. Here I allow myself to ramble most appallingly, but I want clean sophisticated prose for my fiction. I feel renewed stirrings of wanting to write again, write stories.
My copy had an afterword by Kushner which described her intention to leave
Swordspoint as a standalone novel. In an age of endless series and OMG, so many trilogies, I admire this. The story did wrap up rather cleanly, at least for the characters I most cared about. But I also wished for more books (I know there are more -- I will read them) because the twisty political machine she sets in motion isn't anywhere near ready to stop. Sure, one of the main players has been dealt with in a satisfactory manner. There aren't any loose ends left unaddressed. But you just know that live in the Capital City goes on, the political machine chugs forward, and I really want to know what happens. Also, greedily, I want more Richard and Alec, no matter how comfortable I feel with the ending they get in
Swordspoint, because come on. Richard! Alec! ***
Another stop on this magical mystery tour of my train of thought is that Kushner, along with a bunch of other writers and artists, promote a concept called
Interstitial art, a fascinating way to deal with things like this book, stories which fall between the cracks of labels. Like I said,
Swordspoint is fantasy, but it's also kind of not. I realized that this is kind of the way my fiction feels. I like fantastical elements in otherwise realistic settings. I liked the label "urban fantasy" for a long time, and "magical realism" but labels are slippery beasts. And I feel like writers and artists from my generation are embracing an interstitial mentality a lot more easily in part because our influences come from Kushner's generation of authors and artists and in part because I think digital media is an ideal medium for interstitiality. I wish I'd known this term when I took digital rhetoric because the concept would have made for a fascinating conference paper (although I'm happy with my paper on Nerdfighters). I suspect if I'd gone for an MFA instead of an MA, interstitiality would have been a key term in my thesis defense as well.
*I suspect I might be a genre hipster as I am so over X-punk labels and conventions like steampunk and cyberpunk and mannerpunk. I admit that such labels can be useful, but labelling is so nineteenth century and Dewey Decimal. It's all about tags now, babycakes.
**Holy frijoles, this is
awash in
Emily Byrd Starr italics. It might be time for a re-read of those books.
***I wonder, is
Alec Lightwood inspired by our Alec here?